Writing a Standout Personal Essay for Your Law School ApplicationsBy the time you finalize your law school applications, your grade-point average will be set in stone. You will have taken your LSAT, and your score will be what your score will be. GPA and LSAT are the two most important factors in determining whether you will get into law school and what law schools will accept you. But there are still some things you can do to improve your chances. Turning in a polished, impressive, and unique personal essay is one of them.
It's true that, if you have a low GPA and low LSAT score, the best personal essay in the world won't get you into Yale or Harvard. But let's say your GPA and LSAT places you, credentials-wise, in the same range as the bottom quarter of applicants generally accepted by a top ten school like Columbia, Stanford, NYU, or Michigan. The admissions committee has 50 slots left to fill and 150 applicants with similar grades and scores to choose from. How do they decide which of those 150 applicants to accept, to reject, and to wait-list? Once your grades and scores get you within the numerical range of students who generally get offered admission, secondary factors, like the quality of your personal essay, will begin to play a huge role. In fact, your personal essay could mean the difference between being accepted or wait-listed at a desirable school--and a sloppy, lackluster essay could get you rejected outright even if your grades and scores place you solidly in the middle of the pack or even higher in the applicant pool.
So what goes into a standout personal essay? First of all, a high-quality personal essay is well-written. When the admissions committee reads it, they come away with the impression that the author is someone with a great deal of skill and experience at the craft of writing and the use of language. An excellent personal essay is also one that is written with a great deal of care. That means zero, absolutely zero, typographical, spelling, or grammatical errors. The prose must be fluid and stylistically appealing. The vocabulary should be sophisticated, but the essay shouldn't sound as though the writer swallowed a thesaurus.
But good writing is only the bare minimum required. What makes a personal essay truly remarkable is content, not form. That doesn't mean that you have to write a
master's thesis. The best personal essays tell a story in a narrative form but also provide critical commentary on the meaning and impact of the events described. One promising route to a standout essay is to write a personal experience that had meaning to you. Telling the story of that experience well requires drawing the reader in and entertaining him or her--almost as if the reader were reading a top-notch novel. But an excellent personal essay not only tells the story of the experience but also demonstrates the writer's understanding of how the experience changed him or her. That means that you have to go beyond just telling your readers on the admissions committee what happened and explain the effect it had on you and your life.
Above all, remember that a law school admissions committee is trying to assemble a first-year class full of interesting people. They are interested in diversity, so, in your personal essay, be sure to highlight what makes you unique and special. Diversity doesn't just mean belonging to a minority group, such as a particular race or ethnicity. It can mean being an older student, a handicapped student, or a student who has overcome diversity to make it through school. It can mean engaging in unique extracurricular activities like race-car driving or fashion designing. It can mean a unique accomplishment that shows your drive and ambition, such as starting your own business, performing military service, or serving in a political office. The best personal essay, the one that will most likely catch the attention of the admissions committee, is one that reveals who you are and the strengths that you will bring to your law school class.